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Comment by K-Blao on June 8, 2016 at 12:58pm

A lot going on in this video. For one, the song is dope and has a nice smoker's vibe to it. Your flow and lyrics are dope..but you could have changed your tone a little more throughout the record instead of being monotone with the same cadence (Like Biz Markie, Eminem, or Lil Wayne). You should have used more of the night shots instead of rapping in the forest. The forest shots were not bad as far as location, but they should have been shot a little more closer to your face and more loose/freehand...than wide angled and still. Second, the shot of you in the closet with the jersey on should have been shot without the hangers and glass table in the room with you. I would also suggest that you become more aware of the clothes that you are wearing in your video because while you are a new white rapper, people are going to be hyper critical of you...so I would def find a more ORIGINAL look. While Lil Dicky was practically unheard of when he arrived on the music scene, he had a distinct LOOK about him that makes you remember what he looks like. You should try to find this as well. Other than that this is a good start to making videos and you should keep making more. Thanks for submitting.